Story Part 4

Here's part 4:

"I don't know why, but I believe you." Paula said, as her eyes light up still in amazment.
"I must figure out a way to get back to 2009. I don't know how."
Oh I wish I could go back to the future. I thought. I miss my family and friends, and everyobe and I take back everything I said. Please, I want to go back. I thought.
Suddnely, a gust of wind passed by me, and the world started to spin again. Only faster and faster than last time. I feel on the ground and looked at Paula. She was gone. Everyone in the store was gone. Infact, there was no store! It was all black. I closed my eyes for a seccond, and the wind was gone. Everything was calm and peaceful. I stood up and I was not on the floor. I was not at the store. I was on my bed. There was a calender on my wall. October 5, 2009.

"I'm back! I did it!" I screamed. My parents rushed into my room. There was Hannah. And everything was normal. "Mom!" I screamed at her. I gave her the biggest hug. And Dad. And Hannah. I was in 1998 all beacause of one, little, wish. And, I got back all because of one, even smaller, wish...

I finnished it! So, what do you think?